- If this is a real LP, remove all navigation, your goal is to catch e-mail addresses here
- The headline and paragraph below are quite the same, use the paragraph to explain what I can do with it but keep it broad (plan your vacation, prepare a sales pitch, share recipes..)
- "Invite me" is a strange choice of CTA wording as you don' get invited but rather create a group. Why not "Create Group" or "Get started" alternatively can add some text below 'ready in 30 seconds' as you do below in the copy.
- Remove the 'beta' tag [1]
- If this is a real LP, remove all navigation, your goal is to catch e-mail addresses here
- The headline and paragraph below are quite the same, use the paragraph to explain what I can do with it but keep it broad (plan your vacation, prepare a sales pitch, share recipes..)
- "Invite me" is a strange choice of CTA wording as you don' get invited but rather create a group. Why not "Create Group" or "Get started" alternatively can add some text below 'ready in 30 seconds' as you do below in the copy.
1: http://blog.sumall.com/journal/how-boost-sign-ups-website-ch...