Comment Comment by stripline Great reply. I agree that the writing in the post is excellent. While we're giving constructive feedback I'd add this sentence:> I cover tech here in Brazil for +10 years and run a +9 years old independent,It should be past tense "I've covered", and in English we do everything backwards so 10+ and 9+ are more natural. So I'd change that to:I've covered tech here in Brazil for 10+ years and run a 9+ years old independent, parent stripline 4 years ago
> I cover tech here in Brazil for +10 years and run a +9 years old independent,
It should be past tense "I've covered", and in English we do everything backwards so 10+ and 9+ are more natural. So I'd change that to:
I've covered tech here in Brazil for 10+ years and run a 9+ years old independent,