This is a great resource, but I hope that the author sees this comment.
If you want to maximize credibility, remove the line about supporting artists, and anything that can be perceived as political like the line about healthcare.
Artists are a small percentage of people impacted, restaurant workers, nail salons, retail, hotels, airline employees, contractors, massage professionals etc. The list is almost limitless. If you are in another group, you are going to read that line, and think, what about me?
Healthcare is a politically charged issue, right or wrong, listing that here discredits the message for half the readers.
The overall message is important, and I encourage the author to make a few tweaks to get it in front of more people and save lives.
If you want to maximize credibility, remove the line about supporting artists, and anything that can be perceived as political like the line about healthcare.
Artists are a small percentage of people impacted, restaurant workers, nail salons, retail, hotels, airline employees, contractors, massage professionals etc. The list is almost limitless. If you are in another group, you are going to read that line, and think, what about me?
Healthcare is a politically charged issue, right or wrong, listing that here discredits the message for half the readers.
The overall message is important, and I encourage the author to make a few tweaks to get it in front of more people and save lives.