Sorry for the late response. I'm a developer and a few sections I had to Google definitions for were:
> Our suite of advanced analytics, including Cohort Analyses, Sequence Analyses, and Algorithm Metrics will unlock new insights in to your customers and campaigns.
> We use a combination of deep reinforcement learning and hierarchical Bayesian models to quickly and accurately learn about your customers and optimize your campaigns in real-time.
I think you could simplify those a bit, maybe hitting from a higher-level with a link to a more detailed explanation of how Optimail does its thing. I totally get the value in using these terms, but for the landing page I would imagine using simpler language may result in non-technical users being able to grok the benefits of your product a bit better.
> Our suite of advanced analytics, including Cohort Analyses, Sequence Analyses, and Algorithm Metrics will unlock new insights in to your customers and campaigns.
> We use a combination of deep reinforcement learning and hierarchical Bayesian models to quickly and accurately learn about your customers and optimize your campaigns in real-time.
I think you could simplify those a bit, maybe hitting from a higher-level with a link to a more detailed explanation of how Optimail does its thing. I totally get the value in using these terms, but for the landing page I would imagine using simpler language may result in non-technical users being able to grok the benefits of your product a bit better.