I'm a man, I support having more women in tech (thought I don't agree it is the companies responsibilities for this) but I can honestly say, her rewritten job descriptions would make me NOT want to apply (maybe that is the goal?).
1) 'We are a dominant engineering firm that boasts many leading clients'
2) 'We are a community of engineers who have effective relationships with many satisfied clients'
First one makes me think of a solid company with many clients, second one just makes me think they are a hippie community living in the woods foraging for food and no showering while coding.
1) 'We are a dominant engineering firm that boasts many leading clients'
2) 'We are a community of engineers who have effective relationships with many satisfied clients'
First one makes me think of a solid company with many clients, second one just makes me think they are a hippie community living in the woods foraging for food and no showering while coding.