My honest assessment:
- I hate your name and your attempt at branding. "OvaView Management Console", "OvaFlow agents", "OvaFlow Environment". Got real sick of that real fast.
- I don't understand what your product does or how it helps me. There's too much text on your landing page. Also, the main body image looks terrible. Buzzwords like "Global", "Data", "Metrics" blurring into the background. And then lines of "010101010110". What year is this, 1997? A bit behind on design trends.
- Lastly, your users won't care what title they get. Your product isn't social, so having a label like an Ebay "Power Seller" or Yelp "Elite" does not apply here.
Frankly, I read everything on your homepage and I still don't understand what you do, or how anyone would want to pay for it. Any visitor to your site will spend 1% of the time I did. Good luck!
- I hate your name and your attempt at branding. "OvaView Management Console", "OvaFlow agents", "OvaFlow Environment". Got real sick of that real fast.
- I don't understand what your product does or how it helps me. There's too much text on your landing page. Also, the main body image looks terrible. Buzzwords like "Global", "Data", "Metrics" blurring into the background. And then lines of "010101010110". What year is this, 1997? A bit behind on design trends.
- Lastly, your users won't care what title they get. Your product isn't social, so having a label like an Ebay "Power Seller" or Yelp "Elite" does not apply here.
Frankly, I read everything on your homepage and I still don't understand what you do, or how anyone would want to pay for it. Any visitor to your site will spend 1% of the time I did. Good luck!