Very cool tool, but I wish this was explained better. Your tagline should read:
"Build your newsletter as you browse the web" or something to that effect. Another might be "Build your newsletter in minutes as you browse the web".
Somewhere after that should be an easy to understand explanation of how you fulfill the value prop. Right now there is a big gap between your opinion of how long newsletters should take "should take minutes..." and how a person could quickly build a newsletter.
I will need this tool soon, but it took me a while to understand what service you were providing.
Sorry to seem overtly critical, but startup copywriting is always frustratingly opaque to me.
"Build your newsletter as you browse the web" or something to that effect. Another might be "Build your newsletter in minutes as you browse the web".
Somewhere after that should be an easy to understand explanation of how you fulfill the value prop. Right now there is a big gap between your opinion of how long newsletters should take "should take minutes..." and how a person could quickly build a newsletter.
I will need this tool soon, but it took me a while to understand what service you were providing.
Sorry to seem overtly critical, but startup copywriting is always frustratingly opaque to me.