Comment Comment by phaemon A little feedback:Does "recroup" have a capital "R" or not? It's inconsistent.In the first paragraph, the first two lines look like headings, so lose the period at the end: it looks odd."we know every job seeker is different. We built" -- The tenses are jarring there, you should rephrase that (maybe it's OK in the US)."a profile that showcase" -- that should be "showcases""its your Career Launchpad" -- Ouch! You mean "it's".If you're aiming to present a professional appearance, you really need to fix these little typos and errors. parent phaemon 13 years ago
Does "recroup" have a capital "R" or not? It's inconsistent.
In the first paragraph, the first two lines look like headings, so lose the period at the end: it looks odd.
"we know every job seeker is different. We built" -- The tenses are jarring there, you should rephrase that (maybe it's OK in the US).
"a profile that showcase" -- that should be "showcases"
"its your Career Launchpad" -- Ouch! You mean "it's".
If you're aiming to present a professional appearance, you really need to fix these little typos and errors.