Also, by using all caps and omitting a comma, the following sentence is confusing: "PUBLISH A BEAUTIFUL NEWSTAND MAGAZINE, MUCH LIKE THE MAGAZINE FOR ALL IOS DEVICES." I've never heard of The Magazine, so that didn't help.
Consider, at a minimum: "PUBLISH A BEAUTIFUL NEWSTAND MAGAZINE, MUCH LIKE THE MAGAZINE, FOR ALL IOS DEVICES."
Also, by using all caps and omitting a comma, the following sentence is confusing: "PUBLISH A BEAUTIFUL NEWSTAND MAGAZINE, MUCH LIKE THE MAGAZINE FOR ALL IOS DEVICES." I've never heard of The Magazine, so that didn't help.
Consider, at a minimum: "PUBLISH A BEAUTIFUL NEWSTAND MAGAZINE, MUCH LIKE THE MAGAZINE, FOR ALL IOS DEVICES."