This page is proof you can make pretty websites. Sadly, it might also evidence that you may stink at marketing. Its way to busy for me to follow a distinct line, and there is abosolutely no structured copy for me to read. Plus you put the very little copy you have in a carrousel and made it hard to read with some weird color choices.
Now, luckily for you, I'm not your target market ( I think, there is no way for me to know ). Which makes me ask the following question:
Who is your target market? If you answer with every business in Vancourver who wants/needs a website done, then you are taking the wrong route here.
Note: I'm not trying to rain on your parade. So dont take it as an insult, but as real feedback from someone who does copywriting/marketing.
Now, luckily for you, I'm not your target market ( I think, there is no way for me to know ). Which makes me ask the following question:
Who is your target market? If you answer with every business in Vancourver who wants/needs a website done, then you are taking the wrong route here.
Note: I'm not trying to rain on your parade. So dont take it as an insult, but as real feedback from someone who does copywriting/marketing.