In your headings, my eyes were immediately drawn to the block letter text. It was only after I processed it and realized that your message couldn't be "we do mundane things" that it occurred to me to re-read it. Then I found the strikeout and scribblings.
You might consider beefing up the strikeout line and using a stencil font with a more fetching shade of red. Perhaps laid over the revoked text.
Or just drop the idea altogether -- I mean, what's the message there? "We were going to tell you how ordinary we are, but at the last minute we decided we're actually pretty extraordinary after all."
You might consider beefing up the strikeout line and using a stencil font with a more fetching shade of red. Perhaps laid over the revoked text.
Or just drop the idea altogether -- I mean, what's the message there? "We were going to tell you how ordinary we are, but at the last minute we decided we're actually pretty extraordinary after all."
I would not call that your best foot.