Right. But riffing off a response that's a cousin of this one — what are you actually trying to achieve with your writing? And I should also note that I agree with you, in substance if not in style.
I'd suggest that Google aren't your primary audience for this kind of post: it's folk like me, who are quite keen on the idea of GrapheneOS but don't actually use it yet (I actually bought a second-hand spare phone last week with the ulterior motive of trying GrapheneOS on it, we'll see...). What do you want your average reader to think about you, from reading what you've written?
I should add that this post (that I'm directly replying to) comes across to me as very much more appropriate than the original blog post, even as it's in many ways a lot harsher. It's putting Google's behaviour in context, rather than drawing comparisons between your own abilities and their poor performance.
You don't need to drag Google down in order to look good; there are many reasons why what Google (and especially their management) have done is bad for society (and not just for you) and also many reasons why what you're doing is excellent on its own merits, not merely compared to Google.
I'd suggest that Google aren't your primary audience for this kind of post: it's folk like me, who are quite keen on the idea of GrapheneOS but don't actually use it yet (I actually bought a second-hand spare phone last week with the ulterior motive of trying GrapheneOS on it, we'll see...). What do you want your average reader to think about you, from reading what you've written?
I should add that this post (that I'm directly replying to) comes across to me as very much more appropriate than the original blog post, even as it's in many ways a lot harsher. It's putting Google's behaviour in context, rather than drawing comparisons between your own abilities and their poor performance.
You don't need to drag Google down in order to look good; there are many reasons why what Google (and especially their management) have done is bad for society (and not just for you) and also many reasons why what you're doing is excellent on its own merits, not merely compared to Google.