Can I ask which parts? I wrote the intro section by hand, and left the rest of it Fable-generated with significant "guidance" and rounds of re-writing.
I think the current weakest part is the explanation of the science behind it, but I'm curious if there was anything specific that jumped out at you.
I think the current weakest part is the explanation of the science behind it, but I'm curious if there was anything specific that jumped out at you.