Unsolicited feedback (and take with grain salt since I’m probably not your target buyer)
- the subheading is describing the “how” not the “what”. Meaning, what would you use this product for?
- in general, all the headlines could be preposition from the “what” a user would do scenario. Eg instead of saying “Resource Relationship Diagrams” … say “See Resource Relationship with Ease”
- if I’m understanding the tool correctly, this seems like a “lookup” tool. In which case lookup.dev is for sale … just fyi.
- the subheading is describing the “how” not the “what”. Meaning, what would you use this product for?
- in general, all the headlines could be preposition from the “what” a user would do scenario. Eg instead of saying “Resource Relationship Diagrams” … say “See Resource Relationship with Ease”
- if I’m understanding the tool correctly, this seems like a “lookup” tool. In which case lookup.dev is for sale … just fyi.