To be honest I found it hard to read, it seemed to be more focused on using big words and formal language than explaining the point. Not trying to roast you, just honest criticism. I think that's what gives the "ChatGPT" feeling.
I know someone else that writes like that, he is deeply involved in government bureaucracy and they have this complex jargon that I don't know.
I know someone else that writes like that, he is deeply involved in government bureaucracy and they have this complex jargon that I don't know.