IMO That example is way too complicated to be an elevator pitch. I'm trying to understand what working with your framework would be like for a web app, not the boilerplate to establish rules and state management of a small game.
The tutorial has a much better Hello World + incremental feature introduction, I'd put some of that before the larger example.
The tutorial has a much better Hello World + incremental feature introduction, I'd put some of that before the larger example.