One of the things I found helpful about getting out of the specific / formulaic feedback was asking the LLM to ask me questions. At one point I asked a fresh LLM to read the book and then ask me questions. It showed me where there were narrative gaps / confusing elements that a reader would run into, but didn't realy on the specific "answer" from the LLM itself.
I also had a bunch of personal stories interwoven in and it told me I was being "indulgent" which was harsh but ultimately accurate.
I also had a bunch of personal stories interwoven in and it told me I was being "indulgent" which was harsh but ultimately accurate.