I absolutely hate that AI is the first thing I think of whenever I see things like this now.
Yes, innocent mistakes happen in writing and editing all the time. But look at that whole paragraph you're quoting. It does exactly what sloppily-guided AI does: It's using words in an order that sounds relationally intuitive, but taken as a whole it's ping-ponging across completely unrelated concepts. It can't have come from a human, unless, like you said, parts were removed in editing without re-reading the result.
Yes, innocent mistakes happen in writing and editing all the time. But look at that whole paragraph you're quoting. It does exactly what sloppily-guided AI does: It's using words in an order that sounds relationally intuitive, but taken as a whole it's ping-ponging across completely unrelated concepts. It can't have come from a human, unless, like you said, parts were removed in editing without re-reading the result.