Your page doesn't provide much from your book, then tells me to either pay up or feel guilty. Can we maybe get a preview of the first 5 pages without being made to feel like bad people?
Nitpick:
Speech their language should be Speak their language
Get into incumbators should be Get into incubators
Nitpick:
Speech their language should be Speak their language
Get into incumbators should be Get into incubators