Comment by gizajob

Rising to your bait, it seems like you were disappointed by the plot. But your opening statement says you were "completely disappointed" which should be read as you were disappointed to a maximal degree by the whole thing. You then admit that the technical execution was great, but let down by plot, but we already know that you were let down "completely" and so the technical excellence is as good as worthless. So the tone of it reads as if this 16 year-old, even though he has made something amazing, is still a mere ant in comparison to your godlike powers of animation, modelling, rendering, plotting, pacing, and resolution of a one-minute movie.