Comment by jpsouth

On a complete tangent, your last sentence was quite jarring to read (at least for me).

I couldn’t work out what was wrong for a minute or two, but it’s the order of your adjectives.

> They are loud, big, and dangerous

To me reads easier as

> They are big, loud, and dangerous

Not nitpicking or trying to correct you, just a bit of personal commentary on the matter.