It's not great. It reads like some angsty nerd who really doesn't like the idea of something and has spent an inordinate amount of time trying to explain why it's wrong and why his solution is better. Sometimes that works, if your name is Locke or Marx or something, but this writing really doesn't say "genius" to me.
Moreover, I have not heard anyone but myself utter the word "OSI" out loud in 8 or 10 years. Maybe it's still a thing in academia, but it's not in corporate or open source worlds. I don't know if I've met more than 2 people in 5 years that know how TCP works. It's just a magic tunnel that HTTP somehow uses under the covers. So I really don't get the need or purpose for this document. It's like describing in excruciating detail that what you know about the ancient Egyptians is a lie, because that's somehow going to be necessary for somebody?
Moreover, I have not heard anyone but myself utter the word "OSI" out loud in 8 or 10 years. Maybe it's still a thing in academia, but it's not in corporate or open source worlds. I don't know if I've met more than 2 people in 5 years that know how TCP works. It's just a magic tunnel that HTTP somehow uses under the covers. So I really don't get the need or purpose for this document. It's like describing in excruciating detail that what you know about the ancient Egyptians is a lie, because that's somehow going to be necessary for somebody?