Comment by taway789aaa6

Not to mention in the story itself -- they aren't severe typos, but definitely noticeable. Wondering if English perhaps not OP's first language?

Chapter 1

> You awake to an ear-splitting screetch.

Chapter 4

> the internal radio has falled to the ground and is just out of your reach

fwiw, I'm enjoying it so far! But these typos get caught by the HN editor, so...