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Comment by adhesive_wombat

One "trick" that I can't stand, but is beloved by news editors (usually at the low end) is to avoid repeating the main noun and to do anything, no matter how awkward, to find another word:

> A water shortage is has been announced. H2O use will be restricted...

> A car factory burned down. The vehicle plant...

It's jarring to repeat a word to often "by mistake" in close proximity [1]. It's not jarring if that's the subject at hand: it's actually more jarring to stretch for a synonym and make the reader follow that you're still taking about the same exact thing!

[1]: Sometimes even the same unusual word repeated within the same book can stand out for the repetition more than for the word itself.

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