What jumps out at me after reading this notice is how it completely lacks any apology. I am not prescribing what it should say but merely observing that having lived in North America for sometime now, it seems hard for me to imagine for such a notice to not sound profusely apologetic here.
Note: I do not consider words like 'unfortunately' and 'extremely unpleasant' apologetic.
Also, I understand there are cultural differences between the Netherlands and the USA- no joke.
Note: I do not consider words like 'unfortunately' and 'extremely unpleasant' apologetic. Also, I understand there are cultural differences between the Netherlands and the USA- no joke.