The feeling I get from this page is that the branding seems a bit all over the place.
The acronym "pms" just reminds me of "pre menstrual syndrome", and "personal management system" is not a very memorable, original or catchy name.
The logo of the product looks a bit akward as it reminds of a car company logo, and doesnt really communicate anything related to a management system.
The page doesnt look very coherent, with cartoonish drawings, a unmatching color scheme, several typos, and a logo which doesnt fit with the general look neither.
I dont mean to tear down the page, but I hope this can help you to design it to give a better first impression.
The acronym "pms" just reminds me of "pre menstrual syndrome", and "personal management system" is not a very memorable, original or catchy name.
The logo of the product looks a bit akward as it reminds of a car company logo, and doesnt really communicate anything related to a management system.
The page doesnt look very coherent, with cartoonish drawings, a unmatching color scheme, several typos, and a logo which doesnt fit with the general look neither.
I dont mean to tear down the page, but I hope this can help you to design it to give a better first impression.
Edit: typos