This will be an unpopular comment, but how do we know that what you say is true? Should we really accept what you say? Why do you want people to donate? Are you trying to write yourself into the story, bring in your 'sister' along with telling us about death?
My view is that I appreciate people witnessing what they experienced. That's a service to humanity. But when you are playing with others heart strings, start witnessing deaths you haven't seen (the 2 visitors) and make a call for donations, I feel manipulated.
My view is that I appreciate people witnessing what they experienced. That's a service to humanity. But when you are playing with others heart strings, start witnessing deaths you haven't seen (the 2 visitors) and make a call for donations, I feel manipulated.