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1. Pictures.
> What we aren't as humble about is the potential we think this application has.
So you're not humble? Ditch the marketing goofiness. You think it has major potential. Be humble or don't. It's inessential to conveying what HiddenVM is.
> Like Tor, Tails, or Whonix, HiddenVM can be used for bad purposes
Unnecessary. You're already on the back foot.
> - You're a spy
This isn't a normatively 'good' reason.
> Activists, dissidents, political asylum seekers, and journalists (like Laura Poitras)
Don't cite a specific person unless that person is endorsing the product.
> Using Tails should never be reason to suspect you are a criminal or a spy. It protects basic data privacy and democracy.
Don't lead with a user story that exactly matches the stereotype, then. You're walking right into it.
1. Pictures.
> What we aren't as humble about is the potential we think this application has.
So you're not humble? Ditch the marketing goofiness. You think it has major potential. Be humble or don't. It's inessential to conveying what HiddenVM is.
> Like Tor, Tails, or Whonix, HiddenVM can be used for bad purposes
Unnecessary. You're already on the back foot.
> - You're a spy
This isn't a normatively 'good' reason.
> Activists, dissidents, political asylum seekers, and journalists (like Laura Poitras)
Don't cite a specific person unless that person is endorsing the product.
> Using Tails should never be reason to suspect you are a criminal or a spy. It protects basic data privacy and democracy.
Don't lead with a user story that exactly matches the stereotype, then. You're walking right into it.