I click on the link to figure out what Walling is. I'm met with something about Linux and Mac and how the desktop is better. I'm parsing all that cognitive load instead of paying attention to your product. Sure that works for Slack. But when I land on Slack's page, I already know what Slack does these days...odds are I'm there because I'm already committed to using it. There's a difference between mature established products and new ones.
Or to put it another way, the landing page starts by disorganizing my ideas. Good luck.
Or to put it another way, the landing page starts by disorganizing my ideas. Good luck.