I hope you’re kidding.
The initial text isn’t good, the corrections are maybe not perfect and some are more a matter of taste but definitely better than the original wordings.
“y dédier du temps” is closer to the original formulation and equally good for instance.
I noticed that most of native speakers of any language are not that good actually in their mother tongue.
For someone who’s learning the best disservice is to not point their mistakes out.
And sorry it’s not being pedantic to ask people to be precise enough to not spend my time guessing what they maybe were thinking.
I noticed that most of native speakers of any language are not that good actually in their mother tongue.
For someone who’s learning the best disservice is to not point their mistakes out.
And sorry it’s not being pedantic to ask people to be precise enough to not spend my time guessing what they maybe were thinking.
It’s already hard enough when well written.