Pretty impressive! This is what I got (my initial text is in italic):
One day I woke up suddenly after a bad dream. I was sitting on my bed alone. As soon as I turned over I found myself lying down in a strange bed. It had no bed, no mattress and no cover for me. I was just lying on that thick carpet. I looked around to discover nothing but a white bed. There was no window, no furniture. No door. The only clue was a single white mirror that stood beside my bed. And there was a single candle lying on my bedside table. I was not worried or scared. I was fascinated.
I could see the floor.
I could see the walls.
And I could see everything that was around me.
I could hear the wind.
I could see everything from the windows, from the door that was always slightly open. I could even see the light.
I was in a dream world and I knew that I was in a dream. But what I wanted to know was what was happening in this world.
One day I woke up suddenly after a bad dream. I was sitting on my bed alone. As soon as I turned over I found myself lying down in a strange bed. It had no bed, no mattress and no cover for me. I was just lying on that thick carpet. I looked around to discover nothing but a white bed. There was no window, no furniture. No door. The only clue was a single white mirror that stood beside my bed. And there was a single candle lying on my bedside table. I was not worried or scared. I was fascinated.
I could see the floor.
I could see the walls.
And I could see everything that was around me.
I could hear the wind.
I could see everything from the windows, from the door that was always slightly open. I could even see the light.
I was in a dream world and I knew that I was in a dream. But what I wanted to know was what was happening in this world.