why don't you post a link to the different versions of your essay?
fyi, I guessed english was not your native tongue from the title. Your subject could be "Good books for writing", most people on hacker news take it for granted that you're writing in English.
fyi, I guessed english was not your native tongue from the title. Your subject could be "Good books for writing", most people on hacker news take it for granted that you're writing in English.