I have a question: I want to know more about your product. Since I’m the guy who would be selling this to my team and implementing it, I wanted to get a high level view of what your product does.
However, when going to the site, I only got blurbs, a sign up/form/you-want-my-info form and all the interesting stuff scrolling in the background.
I’m not going to click your links. In most cases, I wouldn’t even post a comment (I was just genuinely curious about your customer tracking and hopefully this comment is constructive).
Dear developer, please sell me your wares. I don’t care about the carefully crafted blurbs or delusions of grandeur that you promise. Please say “we help track your front-end bugs, errors, and customer action. We achieve this via loading this script file and attaching these event listeners that populate the following reports. Here’s a demo of what it can do.”
This seems straight forward and targets your desired demographic. I wish you best of luck.
However, when going to the site, I only got blurbs, a sign up/form/you-want-my-info form and all the interesting stuff scrolling in the background.
I’m not going to click your links. In most cases, I wouldn’t even post a comment (I was just genuinely curious about your customer tracking and hopefully this comment is constructive).
Dear developer, please sell me your wares. I don’t care about the carefully crafted blurbs or delusions of grandeur that you promise. Please say “we help track your front-end bugs, errors, and customer action. We achieve this via loading this script file and attaching these event listeners that populate the following reports. Here’s a demo of what it can do.”
This seems straight forward and targets your desired demographic. I wish you best of luck.