I think your copy might be part of the problem. Just taking the hero as an example:
Become a PROFESSIONAL freelancer
Sounds insulting to people who consider themselves professional already but could do with some extra help.
We help freelancers become more professional with automatic streamlined process for managerial tasks like client onboarding, signing NDA and requirement collection right from their personal website.
Weird mix of singular and plurals. If singular then you’d want “with an automated”. Also typically NDA is pluralised to NDAs, and you probably want to refer to “requirements collection”.
I know that sounds picky, but copy is a major part of a sale and correct grammar gives a sense that you sweat the details. Or at least bad grammar gives a sense that you don’t.
Become a PROFESSIONAL freelancer
Sounds insulting to people who consider themselves professional already but could do with some extra help.
We help freelancers become more professional with automatic streamlined process for managerial tasks like client onboarding, signing NDA and requirement collection right from their personal website.
Weird mix of singular and plurals. If singular then you’d want “with an automated”. Also typically NDA is pluralised to NDAs, and you probably want to refer to “requirements collection”.
I know that sounds picky, but copy is a major part of a sale and correct grammar gives a sense that you sweat the details. Or at least bad grammar gives a sense that you don’t.