“A TCP weakness in Linux systems allows ...”
vs
“A TCP weakness allows ... on Linux systems”
Technically, it's not just Linux that's affected - it's the TCP protocol itself. The “on Linux systems” part is sort of redundant, and only serves to point out that other operating systems are unaffected as they don't implement that part of the RFC.
“A TCP weakness in Linux systems allows ...” vs “A TCP weakness allows ... on Linux systems”
Technically, it's not just Linux that's affected - it's the TCP protocol itself. The “on Linux systems” part is sort of redundant, and only serves to point out that other operating systems are unaffected as they don't implement that part of the RFC.