"The real losers are the employees," fourteen paragraphs in.
O that more writers would rediscover the format of the inverted pyramid (think news stories, lead first).
Instead so many are following the format of: dump to paper the entire warm-up process. This warm-up is often necessary. It's fine to even write it in your first draft. Before publication, excise the long intro.
O that more writers would rediscover the format of the inverted pyramid (think news stories, lead first).
Instead so many are following the format of: dump to paper the entire warm-up process. This warm-up is often necessary. It's fine to even write it in your first draft. Before publication, excise the long intro.